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Auteur :  mutos [ Sam 6 Fév 2010 05:16 ]
Sujet du message :  Storyboard dessiné remanié du Chapitre 3

Bonjour à tous,


Et voilà les deux pages du chapitre 3 remaniées d'après les PPT du 28/01 :




Auteur :  Soulnight [ Sam 6 Fév 2010 13:40 ]
Sujet du message :  Re: Storyboard dessiné remanié du Chapitre 3

Ca prend de plus en plus forme, bon courage.

Auteur :  Gel Weo ! [ Ven 12 Fév 2010 10:20 ]
Sujet du message :  Re: Storyboard dessiné remanié du Chapitre 3

La mise en page est intéressante :)

Auteur :  mutos [ Ven 12 Fév 2010 11:50 ]
Sujet du message :  Re: Storyboard dessiné remanié du Chapitre 3

Bonjour Gaëlle,


Oui, on a pas mal travaillé la narration !

Auteur :  Soulnight [ Ven 12 Fév 2010 20:06 ]
Sujet du message :  Re: Storyboard dessiné remanié du Chapitre 3

Le texte est quasiment inutile sur ces deux planche, c'est ça la vraie BD (fan de E.Bilal ^^)

Auteur :  mutos [ Mar 16 Fév 2010 05:16 ]
Sujet du message :  Re: Storyboard dessiné remanié du Chapitre 3

Bonjour Soulnight,


Comme je ne suis pas bon pour concocter des dialogues, j'avais fait le premier storyboard quasiment sans aucun dialogue. On en a ajouté quelques-uns là où il fallait expliquer des choses assez abstraites pour que ce soit difficile de les faire passer en images. Mais dans l'ensemble, on a essayé de rester très graphique et de suggérer plutôt que de montrer lourdement ^-^

Auteur :  Soulnight [ Mar 16 Fév 2010 18:19 ]
Sujet du message :  Re: Storyboard dessiné remanié du Chapitre 3

Un gros dialogue en décourage souvent le lecteur a moins qu'il soit captivé par l'univers ou l'intrigue.
Hoshikaze est très peu connu et je vois mal un lecteur lambda avoir saisi l'univers en trois chapitre.

Le dessin de bonne qualité ça plonge dans l'univers, c'est donc une bonne idée que tu as eu (même si elle n'est pas voulu ^^)

Auteur :  mutos [ Mar 16 Fév 2010 19:14 ]
Sujet du message :  Re: Storyboard dessiné remanié du Chapitre 3

Bonsoir à tous,


@Soulnight : c'est pas moi c'est le zazard, mais c'est vrai que c'est mieux et que l'intervention de Marie a complétement transformé la narration, en fait elle lui a donné un gros coup de punch !

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